Scene Rewrite Touching Spirit Bear Chanler Chapin
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Cole bolted toward the spirit bear only ten feet away lounging the spear like a rocket forced with each ounce of Coles strength, the large white animal smacked its paw into the spear sending it flying as the bear leaped extremely fast onto Cole before his mind or eyes could even process what just happened. Cole stumbled helplessly to get fee from the bears grip as it smashed his massive claws into Cole knocking him flat on his back as the huge white bear growled with anger knocked Cole down again with a hard impact as Cole slid and I big firm rock smashed violently into Coles head causing his whole body to stop in a painful halt. Cole without having time to think bolted away desperately from the bear as fast as he could like never before but the bear easily caught up and knocked furiously into Cole before he had time to blink. Cole’s body filled with a numbing pain as he went flying up into the air and violently smacking his body onto the rock ground. Cole desperately tugged on some devils club fighting to get away from the raging beast and with each desperate out hundreds of tiny thistles dug into Cole’s skin. More and more thistles pierced into Cole’s skin with an unpleasant numbing sting but Cole would try anything to get away from the viscous attack. The bear flared with rage and anger forcing his sharp teeth into Cole’s thigh, as Cole screamed in pain he could taste the blood in his mouth. Cole reached for his knife and began stabbing the bear furiously in the back. The bear clinched his jaws harder and harder as Cole felt a loud crack and numbing pain in his pelvis .Coles nerves tensed in pain as Cole dropped the knife. The bear raised his paw and his paws ripped into Cole’s chest. Cole guarded himself holding up his right arm and the white bears teeth clamped into Coles forearm. Cole felt nothing but numbing in his whole body and everything became silent to Cole. Cole felt his arm pop and crack and he screamed at the bear wildly “please, please no more, no more! The bear stopped and raised his paw smashing it onto Cole’s stomach busting more ribs as Cole gasped for air. The big white beast stood proud and silent looking at Cole. Cole waited expecting the bear to finish him off, but the bear turned around and took off fading into the trees.
Chapter 8 page/65/-/67/
Cole bolted toward the spirit bear only ten feet away lounging the spear like a rocket forced with each ounce of Coles strength, the large white animal smacked its paw into the spear sending it flying as the bear leaped extremely fast onto Cole before his mind or eyes could even process what just happened. Cole stumbled helplessly to get fee from the bears grip as it smashed his massive claws into Cole knocking him flat on his back as the huge white bear growled with anger knocked Cole down again with a hard impact as Cole slid and I big firm rock smashed violently into Coles head causing his whole body to stop in a painful halt. Cole without having time to think bolted away desperately from the bear as fast as he could like never before but the bear easily caught up and knocked furiously into Cole before he had time to blink. Cole’s body filled with a numbing pain as he went flying up into the air and violently smacking his body onto the rock ground. Cole desperately tugged on some devils club fighting to get away from the raging beast and with each desperate out hundreds of tiny thistles dug into Cole’s skin. More and more thistles pierced into Cole’s skin with an unpleasant numbing sting but Cole would try anything to get away from the viscous attack. The bear flared with rage and anger forcing his sharp teeth into Cole’s thigh, as Cole screamed in pain he could taste the blood in his mouth. Cole reached for his knife and began stabbing the bear furiously in the back. The bear clinched his jaws harder and harder as Cole felt a loud crack and numbing pain in his pelvis .Coles nerves tensed in pain as Cole dropped the knife. The bear raised his paw and his paws ripped into Cole’s chest. Cole guarded himself holding up his right arm and the white bears teeth clamped into Coles forearm. Cole felt nothing but numbing in his whole body and everything became silent to Cole. Cole felt his arm pop and crack and he screamed at the bear wildly “please, please no more, no more! The bear stopped and raised his paw smashing it onto Cole’s stomach busting more ribs as Cole gasped for air. The big white beast stood proud and silent looking at Cole. Cole waited expecting the bear to finish him off, but the bear turned around and took off fading into the trees.